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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. XGVQA

he bar chart illustrates the data generated through a survey of residents in Australia about their choice of drinking and purchasing tea and coffee in the last four weeks. The survey included people from five cities of Australia (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart). Overall, the majority of people in these cities preferred going to a cafe to have tea or coffee, except in Adelaide. Compared to other habits, buying fresh coffee was the least popular in all cities. In Sydney and Melbourne, over 45% of the people bought instant coffee, whereas the proportions of those purchasing fresh coffee were around 44% and 43%, respectively. Meanwhile, a very high percentage (above 60%) visited the cafe to have drink tea and coffee. A similar percentage of Hobart city dwellers had this habit as well, while a relatively higher number of residents in Hobart bought instant coffee (slightly below 55%). On the other hand, around 34% of the public in Brisbane and Adelaide bought fresh coffee. In these two cities, people buying fresh coffee and those visiting a cafe were more or less equal, around 55% and 50% in Brisbane and Adelaide, respectively.

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