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The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. 5ORQ
The graph illustreted the registered local and different countries student in Australian universities over a decade. Overall, both graph divided in two part first, indicate data about different countries student who registered their selves and after that joind that courses and second one, indicate about local students data about registered and started that courses. The data of Overseas student accrued over decade means in between decade the ratio of different countries people increased slightly more than 8000 and that started approximate 2000. But, the ratio of student come from overseas was less than registered. In between the data of different countries accrued over time at the end of last two year of decade the students was stabled. The students who are local in Australia registered at the dominant position of graph. In between 2001 to 2007 the graph of Australian students went up but after 2007 to last year of decade the data of local students was stabled. For students who started their coures their graph is in fluctuated situation over the decade.
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countries
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in Australian universities
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a decade.

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divided in two part
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about
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that courses and second one, indicate about
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that courses.

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of Overseas
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decade means in between decade the ratio of
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in Australia
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of Australian
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IELTS academic The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

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