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The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The graphs presented information about the abroad students and local students which were enrolling in Autralian tertiary-education over a decade period. Overall, the overseas students that had been increased in commencing, the same as in total numbers. On the contrary, the total number of local students were rose mostly. However, the commencing numbers were flactuaded. In 2001, the studying abroad number of student
The graphs presented information about the abroad
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students
and local
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students
which were enrolling in
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Autralian
tertiary-education over a decade period.

Overall
, the overseas
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students
that had
been increased
in commencing, the same as in total
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numbers
.
On the contrary
, the total
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number
of local
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students
were rose
mostly
.
However
, the commencing
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numbers
were
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flactuaded
.

In 2001, the studying abroad
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number
of
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student
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IELTS academic The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
62 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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