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The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada.

The bar graph compares the proportion of three categories of individuals who like to go to cinema, theatre, library, and zoo in Canada. Overall, it is clear that most residents like to go to the cinema, and the least population prefer to go to the theatre. Regarding cinema, the highest number of visitors are those who are born in Canada is 70% followed by new migrants from English-speaking countries around 65%, and the lowest quantity of new migrants born in other countries is 50%. Turning to the theatre, people who come from English-speaking countries contributed to about 25% whereas people who born in Canada accounting for 20%, and other country's migrants are only 10%. With regards to library and zoo, other countries migrants, there is a great difference between the library and zoo goers, accounted for approximately 55% and 35% respectively. In terms of English-speaking countries migrants, there is a difference of 10% between them in both categories. While there is a slight difference between library and zoo, visitors who born in Canada, with just below 40% of library and just above 40% in the zoo.
The bar graph compares the proportion of three categories of individuals
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like to go to cinema,
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theatre
, library, and zoo in Canada.

Overall
, it is
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that most residents like to go to the cinema, and the least population prefer to go to the
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theatre
.

Regarding cinema, the highest number of visitors are those
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who
are born
in Canada is 70% followed by new
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migrants
from English-speaking
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countries
around 65%, and the lowest quantity of new
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migrants
born in other
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countries
is 50%. Turning to the
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theatre
,
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people
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who
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come
from English-speaking
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contributed to about 25% whereas
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people
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born in Canada accounting for 20%, and other country's
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are
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only
10%.

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library and zoo, other
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countries
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migrants
, there is a great difference between the library and zoo goers, accounted for approximately 55% and 35%
respectively
. In terms of English-speaking
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countries
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, there is a difference of 10% between them in both categories. While there is a slight difference between library and zoo, visitors
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born in Canada, with
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below 40% of library and
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above 40% in the zoo.
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