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The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.

The chart shows the score among Three teams over four seasons. in 2002, The highest score was 82 points of Team B, in second place was Team C and the last place taken by Team A. Over the year the percentages changed in 2004 Team B had 43 points and Team A had 35 point. But it was contemporary since Team B lead the table. Team B dropped by 39 points and Team A raised by 30 points in Two years. Team C stayed around the same points over the years with the highest score of 15 in 2003. In conclusion we can emphasis the dominated of Team B even they lost abundance points.
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the score among Three
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over four seasons.

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2002, The highest score was 82
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of
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B, in second place was
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C and the last place taken by
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A.

Over the year the percentages
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changed
in 2004
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B had 43
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and
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A had 35 point.

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it was contemporary since
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B lead the table.

Team B dropped by 39
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and
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A raised by 30
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points
in Two years.

Team C stayed around the same
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over the years with the highest score of 15 in 2003.

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the dominated of
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B even they lost abundance
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.

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114 words
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