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The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

THE LINE GRAPH ILLUSTRATES NUMBER OF undergraduate ENROLLED BY OVERSEAS graduate AND LOCAL junior IN AUSTRALIAN UNIVERSITIES IN A TEN-YEAR PERIOD AND THE SCALE IS Measured IN THOUSANDS. OVERALL, THE ENROLLMENT OF OVERSEAS scholar IS GRADUALLY Increasing FROM LOW TO HIGH. WHERE AS LOCAL junior STARTED WITH GOOD NUMBER INCREASEING AND THE LINE IS STABLE FROM FOUR YEARS. AND COMMENCING IS FLUCTUATED on the contrary AT OTHER SIDE IT ALSO Increasing AND STABILISED FROM TWO YEARS. WITH REGARD TO AS WE OBSERVE THAT IN OVERSEAS PEOPLE IN STARTING OF YEAR 2000 WAS extremely Fewer PEOPLE ARE JOINED on the contrary IN 2010 THE GROWTH WAS VERY GOOD WITH 8000. ON THE OTHER HAND IN THE FIRST YEAR STARTED WITH GRAT 400000 scholar AND a RISE TILL 2007 AND IT IS REMAINED STEADY. THE graduate FROM THE OVERSEAS AS INCREASIND EVERY YEAR AS WE Observed on the contrary THE LOCAL undergraduate ARE PLATUED BY SAME RANGE.

THE LINE GRAPH ILLUSTRATES NUMBER OF undergraduate ENROLLED BY You use this word too often, consider replacing it withawayabroadforeign
OVERSEAS
 graduate AND LOCAL junior IN AUSTRALIAN UNIVERSITIES IN A TEN-YEAR PERIOD AND THE SCALE IS Measured
 IN THOUSANDS.

OVERALL
, THE ENROLLMENT OF You use this word too often, consider replacing it withawayabroadforeign
OVERSEAS
 scholar IS GRADUALLY
 Increasing FROM LOW TO HIGH. Did you mean "WHEREAS"?WHEREAS
WHERE AS
 LOCAL junior This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
STARTED
 WITH This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
GOOD
 NUMBER Possible spelling mistake found.IncreasingINCREASE ING
INCREASEING
 AND THE LINE IS STABLE FROM FOUR YEARS. AND COMMENCING IS FLUCTUATED
on the contrary
 AT OTHER SIDE IT ALSO
 Increasing AND Possible spelling mistake. 'STABILISED' is British English.Stabilized
STABILISED
 FROM TWO YEARS.

WITH REGARD TO AS WE OBSERVE THAT IN You use this word too often, consider replacing it withawayabroadforeign
OVERSEAS
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
PEOPLE
 IN STARTING OF You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
YEAR
 2000 WAS extremely
 Fewer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
PEOPLE
 ARE This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatedfused
JOINED
on the contrary
 IN 2010 THE GROWTH WAS This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
VERY
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
GOOD
 WITH 8000. ON THE OTHER HAND
 IN THE FIRST
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
YEAR
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
STARTED
 WITH Possible spelling mistake found.GreatGrantGrayGoatGrabRat
GRAT
 400000 scholar AND a RISE TILL 2007 AND IT IS REMAINED
 STEADY. THE graduate FROM THE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withawayabroadforeign
OVERSEAS
 AS Possible spelling mistake found.Increasing
INCREASIND
 EVERY You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
YEAR
 AS WE Observed on the contrary
 THE LOCAL undergraduate ARE Possible spelling mistake found.PlaguedPlatedPlattedPLAT UED
PLATUED
 BY SAME RANGE. 