Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

the graphs below show the amount of production of four different fruits and the average retail price per kilogram of those fruits from 1994 to 2006

the graphs below show the amount of production of four different fruits and the average retail price per kilogram of those fruits from 1994 to 2006 o5agw
The graph show changes in the quantities of production of four specific fruits and the average retail sales in dollars from 1994 to 2006Overall, while Apples, pears and oranges tend to decline at both fruit production and average price per kilogram, Plums have quite positive growth over a period of 6 years. From 1994 to 2000, all 4 type of fruit were recorded a major drop at fruit production of apples, pears, oranges and plums drop down from 85, 82 40 and 35 thoundsand tonnes down to 82, 60, 10 and around 10 thoundsand tonnes respectively, the average retail sales also falled down with apple at around 4, pears 2 time lower than in the past, oranges ad plums both with 1. 5 dollar. Since 2000 to 2006, pears plummeted to 40 million tons, 2 time lower than apple in the amount of fruit produced. Oranges was also received a reduce at 0 thoundsand tones, by contrast to plums with the climb of 15 thounsand tones. Similary to fruit production, rentail sales of 4 fruits also recorded the same numbers with apples, oranges and pears falling to 3, 1 and hovering around 2 dollars respectively, while plums witnessed a jump to 2 dollars in 2006
The graph
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
in the quantities of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
production
of four specific
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fruits
and the average retail sales in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dollars
from 1994 to 2006Overall, while
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Apples
, pears and oranges tend to decline at both
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fruit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
production
and average price per kilogram,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Plums
have quite
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
growth over a period of 6 years. From 1994 to 2000, all 4 type of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fruit
were recorded
a major drop at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fruit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
production
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apples
, pears, oranges and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plums
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "drop".
drop down
from 85, 82 40 and 35
Possible spelling mistake found.
thoundsand
tonnes down to 82, 60, 10 and around 10
Possible spelling mistake found.
thoundsand
tonnes
respectively
, the average retail sales
also
Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "fell", the past tense form of the verb 'fall'?
falled
down with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apple
at around 4, pears 2 time lower than in the past, oranges ad
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plums
both with 1. 5
Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: "dollars".
dollar
. Since 2000 to 2006, pears plummeted to 40 million tons, 2 time lower than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apple
in the amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fruit
produced. Oranges
You should probably use: "are" or "were".
was
also
received a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
at 0
Possible spelling mistake found.
thoundsand
tones, by contrast to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plums
with the climb of 15
Possible spelling mistake found.
thounsand
tones.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Similary
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fruit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
production
,
Possible spelling mistake found.
rentail
sales of 4
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fruits
also
recorded the same numbers with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apples
, oranges and pears falling to 3, 1 and hovering around 2
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dollars
respectively
, while
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plums
witnessed a jump to 2
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dollars
in 2006
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic the graphs below show the amount of production of four different fruits and the average retail price per kilogram of those fruits from 1994 to 2006

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
204 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 6band
    how many visitors came to the UK
    The graph compares how many visitors came to the UK and UK residents who went to other countries from 1979 to 1999, and the chart illustrates which countries were most popular with British people in 1990. Overall, the number of people who visited Britain and the number of Britons who went to other ...
  • 6band
    visitors came to the UK and others countries
    The graph compares how many visitors came to the UK and UK residents who went to theother countries from 1979 to 1999, and the chart illustrates which countries were most popular with British people in 1990. Overall, the number of people who visited Britain and the number of Britons who went to oth...
  • 6band
    The process shows the generation of biodiesel. Explain this and symmetries the information
    The diagram represents the cycle in which Biodiesel is produced. Overall, the process consists of four major stages، begining with biosynthesis and ending up with transestrification reaction. In the first stage, sunlight is harnessed oil crops to perform photosynthesis for Biodiesel manufacturing....
  • 6band
    The given chart below shows data on money spenting on books
    The supplied chart provides data on currency expenditure for books in four European countries, namely Germany, France, Italy, and Austria over the period of 1995 to 2005. The proportion measures with million US dollar. Overall, it can be seen that there was an increase in the amount ofall the given...
  • 5band
    The diagram illustrates how an Australian town adopted a rainwater harvesting system.
    The diagram given is a demonstration of the way which Australian state use to collect rainwater and make it drinkable. Overall, the process involves three main steps: filtter, storge and treatment water by adding chemicals to make water fit to drinking. This process needs tubes, drans, tank, chemiac...
  • 6band
    remodeling plan for the Southwest Airport
    The diagram summarizes a remodeling plan for the Southwest Airport. The development includes the building of several new areas, as well as the change in location of some of the existing areas. Firstly, the new airport will have ten more gates than the previous one. Also, its connectivity with the c...





Get more results for topic:
  • the graphs below show the amount of production of four different fruits and the average retail price per kilogram of those fruits from 1994 to 2006