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summarize the details from the chart below regarding the deaths from terrorism attack

summarize the details from the chart below regarding the deaths from terrorism attack KnA91

Summarizing the details of untimely deaths of innocent people caused by Heinous terrorist attacks in three different countries. between 2011 and 2015. Between 2011 to 2012 all three nations (Afghanistan, Iraq and Nigeria) faced more then 2000 to 3500 deaths because of terrorist attacks. But in the case of Afghanistan, from 2012 onwards till year 2015 there is no decrease in the casualty numbers. Rather there is a continuous growth, from less then 3000 deaths in 2012 to more then 5000 deaths in 2015. even came up to the second position in death toll graph, in the year 2015. In the case of Iraq and Nigeria, from 2012 onwards till 2014 there is a sudden increase in the death numbers. In the year 2014 both Iraq and Nigeria faced there peak. where Iraq faced more then 9000 and Nigeria more then 7000 deaths due to terrorism. Both of these nations (Iraq and Nigeria) after the year 2014, have witnessed some decline in the death numbers caused by terrorism. in the year 2015 Iraq came down to 7000 deaths from more then 9000 deaths and Nigeria came down to 5000 deaths from previously 7000 deaths. To conclude, Afghanistan after the year 2012 has faced more linear but continuous growth in the death numbers due to terrorism. On the other hand both Iraq and Nigeria peaked in the year 2014 and then witnessed some decline in the death numbers.

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details
 of untimely
 deaths of innocent This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 caused by Heinous terrorist attacks in three This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 countries. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBetween
between
 2011 and 2015.

Use "between" + "and" not "to."  Try this: "Between 2011 and 2012".Between 2011 and 2012
Between 2011 to 2012
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faced
 more Comparison requires "than", not 'then' nor 'as'.than
then
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because
 of terrorist attacks. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 in the case of Afghanistan, from 2012 onwards till You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2015 there is no decrease in the casualty You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
numbers
. Rather
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then
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then
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even
 came up to the second position in death toll graph, in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2015.

In the case of Iraq and Nigeria, from 2012 onwards till 2014 there is a sudden increase in the death You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
numbers
. In the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2014 Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphboth.both!both?both:both,both;
both


Iraq and Nigeria You use this word too often, consider replacing it withriskconfrontchallengeexperiencefightoppose
faced
 there peak. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhere
where
 Iraq You use this word too often, consider replacing it withriskconfrontchallengeexperiencefightoppose
faced
 more Comparison requires "than", not 'then' nor 'as'.than
then
 9000 and Nigeria more Comparison requires "than", not 'then' nor 'as'.than
then
 7000 deaths due to terrorism. Both of these nations (Iraq and Nigeria) after the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2014, have witnessed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 decline in the death You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
numbers
 caused by terrorism. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2015 Iraq came down to 7000 deaths from more Comparison requires "than", not 'then' nor 'as'.than
then
 9000 deaths and Nigeria came down to 5000 deaths from previously 7000 deaths.

To conclude
, Afghanistan after the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2012 has You use this word too often, consider replacing it withriskconfrontchallengeexperiencefightoppose
faced
 more linear This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 continuous growth in the death You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
numbers
 due to terrorism. On the other hand
 both Iraq and Nigeria peaked in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2014 and then witnessed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 decline in the death You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
numbers
. 