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The graphs below give information about people living in extreme poverty from 1988 to 2008 by 6 territories.

The graphs below give information about people living in extreme poverty from 1988 to 2008 by 6 territories. qV3wa
TThe graph shows the amount of utmost poor people who live in countryside and they are daily spend less than 1. 25 dollar located in East Asia, South Asia, South East Asia, Sub Saharan Africa, Latin America and Caribbean, and Middle East and North Africa in the years of 1988, 1998 and 2008 so, once every ten years. It is clearly that Middle East and North Africa and Latin America and the Caribbean have under the 100 millions extreme poor people for every given years. And there is the most of amount extreme poor lifestyle for countryside people where is South Asia. In addition, East Asia have most noticeable change about number of rural people living on less than 1. 25 dollar per a day. East Asia had 500 million very poverty persons in rural area approximately by1991 and intersected with South Asia at the same date. East Asia's line Intersected the other time with Sub-Saharan Africa average in 2004 about under the 300 million poor people. Further, line of East Asia steadily decreased and figures were average 120 million last, in 2008. South East Asia's line was regular around 150 million between 1988 and 1998 but after that time decreased average 90 million until 2008. The only line to increase in 2008 is Sub Saharan Africa. Sub Saharan Africa was under 200 million in 1988 and over the 300 million in 2008.
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the amount of utmost
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poor
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who
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live
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countryside and
they are daily spend less than 1. 25
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located in East Asia, South Asia, South East Asia, Sub Saharan Africa, Latin America and Caribbean, and Middle East and North Africa in the years of 1988, 1998 and 2008
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, once every ten years.

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clearly
that Middle East and North Africa and Latin America and the Caribbean have under the 100
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millions
extreme
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poor
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people
for every
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given
years. And there is the
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most of amount
extreme
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poor
lifestyle for countryside
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people
where is South Asia.
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, East Asia have most noticeable
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change
about number of rural
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people
living on less than 1. 25
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per a day.

East Asia had 500
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million
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very
poverty persons in rural area approximately by1991 and intersected with South Asia at the same date. East Asia's
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line
Intersected the other time with Sub-Saharan Africa average in 2004 about under the 300
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million
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poor
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people
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,
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of East Asia
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decreased and figures were average 120
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million
last, in 2008. South East Asia's
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was regular around 150
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million
between 1988 and 1998
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after that time decreased average 90
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million
until 2008. The
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to increase in 2008 is Sub Saharan Africa.
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Sub Saharan
Africa was under 200
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in 1988 and over the 300
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in 2008.

IELTS academic The graphs below give information about people living in extreme poverty from 1988 to 2008 by 6 territories.

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