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temperature adì precipitation in UK

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Beginning from monthly precipitation it is clear from the chart that the highest precipitation period starts in June and finishes in September. Indeed, data about rain follow a normal curve trend that finds its top during August and its lowest level during the last month. Also, temperature follows an interesting trend and we can appreciate an astonishing rise of temperature which sees, for instance, its low record in January at 20 degrees and its maximum during May with 32 degrees. As we know, usually August is known as the hottest month but, in this case, May is warmer than the eighth month. In conclusion and in my point of view, there is not a significant correlation between temperature and precipitation. In fact, it is quite evident that the hottest months are not those where rains are concentrated. Rains events are probably connected with medium temperature and the evidence is given by this chart.

Beginning from monthly precipitation it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 from the chart that the highest precipitation period This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 in June and finishes in September.

Indeed
, data about rain follow a normal curve trend that finds its top during August and its lowest level during the ‘last month’ indicates a finished event of the past. Please check the predicate's tense.
last month
.

Also
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
temperature
 follows an interesting Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).trend, and
trend and
 we can appreciate an astonishing rise of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
temperature
 which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnesses
sees
, for instance
, its low record in January at 20 degrees and its maximum during May with 32 degrees. As we know, usually
 August is known
 as the hottest month This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
, in this case
, May is warmer than the eighth month.

In conclusion
 and in my point of view, there is not a significant correlation between You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
temperature
 and precipitation. In fact, it is quite evident that the hottest months are not those where rains are concentrated
. Rains This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
 are probably
 connected with medium You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
temperature
 and the evidence is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 by this chart. 