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Task one about Recycle organic waste

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The diagram illustrates the steps by which to compost recycled from organic waste in order to produce a natural garden fertiliser. Overall, there are approximately 5 basic steps in the process of making fertiliser at home from recycled organic waste matter, beginning with the preparation of an empty plastic container and ending with composted organic garden fertiliser. The first stage is to acquire a plastic container of approximately 2m cube that has several holes in the sides to allow air to flow in and out of the container. Next, organic materials such as scraps, grass clippings and newspapers are layered inside the container in approximately 15cm thick layers. Afterwards, hot water and some form of nitrogen are added to the compost to assist in the compositing process which follows. During this process air will flow in and out of the air holes on the sides of the container. Approximately six months later, the composted material will be ready to be removed from the container and used in the garden as fertiliser.
The diagram illustrates the steps by which to compost recycled from
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organic
waste in order to produce a natural garden
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fertiliser
.
Overall
, there are
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approximately
5 basic steps in the process of making
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fertiliser
at home from recycled
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organic
waste matter, beginning with the preparation of an empty plastic
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container
and ending with composted
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organic
garden
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fertiliser
. The
first
stage is to acquire a plastic
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container
of
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approximately
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2m
cube that has several holes in the sides to
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allow
air to flow in and out of the
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container
.
Next
,
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organic
materials such as scraps, grass clippings and newspapers
are layered
inside the
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container
in
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approximately
Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "15 cm"
15cm
thick layers. Afterwards, hot water and
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some
form of nitrogen are
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added
to the compost to assist in the compositing process which follows. During this process air will flow in and out of the air holes on the sides of the
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container
.
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Approximately
six months later, the composted material will be ready to
be removed
from the
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container
and
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used
in the garden as
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fertiliser
.
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IELTS academic Task one about Recycle organic waste

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
171 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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