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The chart below shows the results survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. KPmk
The chart illustrates the habits of coffee, tea and drinking habits in five major cities of Australia (sydney, melbourne, bribane, adeliade, horbart). Units are measured in percentage of city residents. Overall, Among the five cities most of the people went to a cafe for a coffee or tea in a last 4 weeks which is comparatively higher than other cities. While in the sydney most of the people went to buy instant coffee whereas, Both the brisbane and the adelaide least amount of people brought fresh coffee in last 4 weeks. In terms of melbourne, most of the people around (66%) went to a cafe for a coffee which is higher compare to other cities. However, In brisbane approximately (33 %) of people bought fresh coffee in last few weeks. On the other hand, In Horbart, Around (58%) people bought instant coffee in last few week which is highest among other cities although, there is least amount if people who bought fresh coffee in last 4 weeks.
The chart illustrates the habits of
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coffee
, tea and drinking habits in five major
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cities
of Australia (
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sydney
,
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melbourne
,
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bribane
,
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adeliade
,
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horbart
). Units
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in percentage of city residents.

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, Among the five
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cities
most of the
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people
went to a
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for a
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coffee
or tea in a last 4 weeks which is
comparatively
higher than
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other
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. While in the
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sydney
most of the
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went to
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buy
instant
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whereas, Both the
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brisbane
and the
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adelaide
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amount of
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brought fresh
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in last 4 weeks.

In terms of
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melbourne
, most of the
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around (66%) went to a
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for a
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.
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approximately (33

%) of
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in last few weeks.

On the
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hand, In
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Horbart
, Around (58%)
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in last
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in last 4 weeks.

IELTS academic The chart below shows the results survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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