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The graphic illustrates how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology gathers up-to-the-minute meteorological information in order to produce trustworthy predictions.

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The graphic illustrates how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology gathers up-to-the-minute meteorological information in order to produce trustworthy predictions. Overall, it can be seen from the diagram that the four main stages of collection stastitics including incoming information, analysis & forecasting, preparing the broadcast and finally transmission. Having a closer look at the picture, to begins with the stage of compensation figures, which was collected by satelite and it communicates this data to the radar and drifting buoy. At the interpretation and calculate stage, numerous information transformed into maps concluding satellite photo, radar screen and synoptic chart. At the stage three, total of this pictures were contribute to the computer for adapting the publication. Completely, a plenthora of progam received by distribution of data and it will be broadcast by TV newsreader, radio and recorded announcement.
The graphic illustrates how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology gathers up-to-the-minute meteorological information in order to produce trustworthy predictions.

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stastitics
including incoming information, analysis & forecasting, preparing the broadcast and
finally
transmission.

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with the
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stage
of compensation figures, which
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satelite
and it communicates this data to the radar and drifting buoy. At the interpretation and calculate
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stage
, numerous information transformed into maps concluding satellite photo, radar screen and synoptic chart. At the
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stage
three, total of
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to the computer for adapting the publication. Completely, a
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received by distribution of data and it will be broadcast by TV newsreader, radio and recorded announcement.
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IELTS academic The graphic illustrates how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology gathers up-to-the-minute meteorological information in order to produce trustworthy predictions.

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