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the diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. The table give information about people's reasons for using car in city

the diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. The table give information about people's reasons for using car in city KWeqk
The pie chart illustrates about the percentages of using transport and car. The table illustrates the percentages of people’s reasons for using the car in city. Overall, it can clearly be seen that in the pie chart, the percentage of people who using car is the highest, contrast with the percentages of people who using bus and taxi. In the table, the reason is commuted to work is the highest. It is worth noticing that in the pie chart, the percentage of car’s user account for a half, which taking the highest place with 45%. It is 10% more than the percentage of LRT’s user (about 35%. In addition, the percentage of people who using bus shares the same figure with the percentage of people who using taxi (about 10%). As can be seen from the table, the percentage of Commute To Work reason is the highest with 55%, followed by the percentage of Business reason (about 45%). Even though the 3rd place is the percentage of Taking children to school, it is 5% less than the percentage of Business reason, which taking the 2nd place. And there are no difference between the percentage of Shopping reason and Leisure activities ( 15%).
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using bus and taxi. In the table, the
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of Commute To Work
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of Business
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(about 45%).
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of Taking children to school, it is 5% less than the
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of Business
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IELTS academic the diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. The table give information about people's reasons for using car in city

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202 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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