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The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. ND8m

The given line graph illustrates the number of passengers travelling Underground Station at different times in a day. Overall, at any given time in a day, the number of commuters is never less than 100 whereas the highest number of passengers at any given time is no more than 400 in the given day. The early morning and late-night hours depict the lowest number of travellers at the station which is approximately 100 to 120. Interestingly, early evening at 6 pm also shows the lowest number of commuters commuting through trains. On the contrary, passengers travel the most at the peak hours of 8 in the morning and 7 in the evening which is approximately 400 in numbers. Evidently, the number of commuters comes down as the day progresses towards noon. At noon, the graph shows a slight increase from the late mornings from 200 at 10 am to 300 at 4 pm.

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