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The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. • Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. • QD51
The chart shows the percentages of paper and cardboard, glass containers, aluminium cans and plastics that were recycled in one country between 1982 and 2010. In 1982, about 65% of paper and cardboard was recycled. This figure fluctuated before rising steeply to reach a peak of 80% in 1994. From then on, however, it decreased steadily to a level of 70% in 2010. In 1982, half of all glass containers were recycled; after dipping to a low of 40% in 1990, the glass recycling rate gradually increased to 60% by 2010. Aluminium cans were first recycled in 1986, starting at about 5%, but this figure climbed rapidly over 25 years and by 2010 it had reached 45%. Recycling of plastics, on the other hand, was not introduced until 1990 and, although the growth in this category was also constant, it was very slow, rising from about 2% to around 8% over the period. Overall, the proportion of paper and cardboard that was recycled was the highest of the four classes of material, but this category experienced a decline after 1994, whereas there was a continuing upward trend in the recycling of the other materials.
The chart
shows
the percentages of paper and cardboard, glass containers,
aluminium
cans and plastics that were
recycled
in one country between 1982 and 2010. In 1982, about 65% of paper and cardboard was
recycled
. This figure fluctuated
before
rising
steeply
to reach a peak of 80% in 1994. From then on,
however
, it decreased
steadily
to a level of 70% in 2010. In 1982, half of all glass containers were
recycled
; after dipping to a low of 40% in 1990, the glass recycling rate
gradually
increased to 60% by 2010.
Aluminium
cans were
first
recycled
in 1986, starting at about 5%,
but
this figure climbed
rapidly
over 25 years and by 2010 it had reached 45%. Recycling of plastics,
on the other hand
, was not introduced until 1990 and, although the growth in this category was
also
constant, it was
very
slow, rising from about 2% to around 8% over the period.
Overall
, the proportion of paper and cardboard that was
recycled
was the highest of the four classes of material,
but
this category experienced a decline after 1994, whereas there was a continuing upward trend in the recycling of the other materials.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. •

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  American English
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6.0
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