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A cursory glance at the pie chart illustrates the details about the percentage of online sold items such as groceries, home appliances, electronic things, clothes in the year 2019 and 2020 in Canada.

A cursory glance at the pie chart illustrates the details about the percentage of online sold items such as groceries, home appliances, electronic things, clothes in the year 2019 and 2020 in Canada. It is interesting to note that, in Canada, people mostly bought clothing items in 2019. Whereas, electronic gadgets were highly purchased by 2020. It is noticeable that the use of home and kitchen items were declined by given the time. It was 29% and 11% respectively. However, selling of groceries items was increased by almost 8%. similarly, the percentage of electronic items was 19 by Canadian, but in 2020 it was approximately double and reached 45%. Moreover, in 2020, the sell of clothing things was less as compared to in the year 2019, it was 22% and 38% respectively. All in all, the percentage of groceries in 2019 and the percentage of home and kitchen appliances were quite similar.

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