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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian Cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian Cities. 8KxP
The graph displays the outcome of an audit about Australian people’s how they consume coffee and tea in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart. Overall, it is clear from the chart that went to a café for coffee and tea is most popular for all cities whereas bought fresh coffee is the last of the list and all date are in last 4 weeks. Most of the people from Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart was preferred to go to café for coffee or tea which is over 60%. However, bought instant coffee or tea was second popular in those cities whereas over 45% of residents in Sydney and Melbourne and over 50% of residents in Hobart are used this service. Moreover, bought fresh coffee was less popular all three cities in last 4 weeks. In contrast, though in Adelaide’s people went to café was less popular than bought instant coffee, but in Brisbane went to café was still popular. Bought fresh coffee was less popular in Brisbane and Adelaide than other three cities which was lass than 35% of residents bought fresh coffee in last 4 weeks.
The graph displays the outcome of an audit about Australian
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people’s
how they consume
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coffee
and
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tea
in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart.

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, it is
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clear
from the chart that went to a café for
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coffee
and
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tea
is most
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popular
for all
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cities
whereas
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bought
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fresh
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coffee
is the last of the list and all date are in last 4 weeks.

Most of the
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people
from Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart
was preferred
to go to café for
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coffee
or
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tea
which is over 60%.
However
,
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bought
instant
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coffee
or
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tea
was second
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popular
in those
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cities
whereas over 45% of residents in Sydney and Melbourne and over 50% of residents in Hobart are
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used
this service.
Moreover
,
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bought
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fresh
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coffee
was less
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popular
all three
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cities
in last 4 weeks.

In contrast
, though in Adelaide’s
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people
went to café was less
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popular
than
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bought
instant
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coffee
,
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but
in Brisbane went to café was
still
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popular
.
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Bought
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fresh
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coffee
was less
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popular
in Brisbane and Adelaide than other three
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cities
which was lass than 35% of residents
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bought
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fresh
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coffee
in last 4 weeks.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian Cities.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
186 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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