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The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph represents the number of travelers using subway in London on any given day. It is quite evident from the graph that more people uses underground railway during peak traffic hours to reach their work location. In the early hours of the day only 100 people uses train as mode of transport. This number increases steeply from 6 AM to 7: 30 AM and reaches a count of 400 passengers. After reaching its peak, the line drop to approximately to 170 travelers by 10. 20 am. From late morning to early noon, the count increases very steadilty to 270 people. During lunch hours, the count of people using subway is between 280 to 300 passengers. We can a see a sudden drop at 4. 00 AM with sudden rise to 370 passengers by late evening. By the night, the number of uses drop to around 150 and remains the same. In conclusion, more people uses pubilc transport for commision from home to work and back home.
The line graph represents the number of travelers using subway in London on any
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day. It is quite evident from the graph that more
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people
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underground railway during peak traffic hours to reach their work location.

In the early hours of the day
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100
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train as mode of transport. This number increases
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from 6 AM to 7: 30 AM and reaches a count of 400 passengers. After reaching its peak, the line drop to approximately to 170 travelers by 10. 20 am. From late morning to early noon, the count increases
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to 270
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. During lunch hours, the count of
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using subway is
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passengers. We can a
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a sudden drop at 4. 00 AM with sudden rise to 370 passengers by late evening. By the night, the number of
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drop to around 150 and remains the same.

In conclusion
, more
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uses
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transport for
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from home to work and back home.

IELTS academic The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

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