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77. The table below depicts the information about the posts held by women in parliament and in management in 5 countries in 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Countries Total number of seats in government Total number of seats in management Canada 54% 36% Ukraine 23% 40% Egypt 52% 36% Rome 10% 52% Italy 40% 25%

77. The table below depicts the information about the posts held by women in parliament and in management in 5 countries in 2000. mRoO
The table depicts information about numbers of seats in management and in government area for women in five developed nation in 2000. Overall, number of seats for women were maximun in canada for government area and in management in Rome. It is clear from table, canadian women had high oppertunity for government, by contrast seats of management (36%). seats of women in management was double in Ukraine as campared to the government seats. Moreover, number of women seats in managent sector was not maximun as government seats in Egypt and Italy. 10%seats of women occupied in government area in Rome, by contrast in management it was 52%.
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IELTS academic 77. The table below depicts the information about the posts held by women in parliament and in management in 5 countries in 2000.

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