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The graph shows the spending on research into renewable energy of four countries from 1975 to 2000.

The graph illustrates how much the four countries spent on research into renewable energy during the period of 1975 to 2000. It is clear to see that there are no budget consuming on research into renewable energy，while the expenses from Switzerland，Denmark，Spain，the UK reached to 2. 6，1. 8，1 and 0. 5 dollars per person respectively1 in 1980. For the flowing(next) 20 years, the figure for Switzerland double to round 5. 2 dollars per person. Whereas, the expenditure for Denmark leveled off in the flowing 15 years before it rose remarkably and arrived at 3 dollars per person in 2000. When it comes to the investment form Spain, it saw an slight decrease to 0. 5 dollars per person in 1990 after it experienced a steady growth to 0. 8 dollars per person in 2000. Additionally, the expenditure from the UK peaked at 0. 9 in 1985, while it was the country which spent on the least expenditure in research into renewable energy. Overall, Switzerland was the country that allocate the most funds to research into renewable, whereas the expenditure from UK was the smallest.

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