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The graph shows the spending on education, medical care and pension in a particular country drom 2001 to 2051.

The graph shows the spending on education, medical care and pension in a particular country drom 2001 to 2051. xKR6

The given line graph provides information of government spending on education, medical care and pension in a specific nation from 2001 to the present, and gives projections till 2051. Regarding with expenditure on education was the highest approximately by a minority in 2001. This spending has fallen slightly at the present time, and it is predicted that it will remain stable in the future accounted for 14%. Moving further, at nearly 11% was spent on medical care from 2001 to 2011, after which has been an increase in the health budget, which is projected to continue till 2021. However, it is estimated that expenditure will dramatically decline to 4%by 2051. In the same way, the spending on pension was a leveling off with 6% in the year from 2001 to 2021. Moreover, it is expected that the expenditure will rapidly esacalate with 18% in 2051. From the overall analysis, it can be seen that the speding on education was gradually decrease and in the upcoming days it will remain same, but expenditure on medical care and pension will show opposing trend in the future.

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government
 spending on education, medical care and pension in a specific nation from 2001 to the present, and gives projections till 2051. Regarding with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisbursementoutlayfigureconsumptionpricerate
expenditure
 on education was the highest approximately by a minority in 2001. This spending has fallen slightly
 at the present time, and it is predicted
 that it will remain stable in the future accounted for 14%. Moving further
, at nearly
 11% was spent
 on medical care from 2001 to 2011, after which has been an increase in the health budget, which is projected
 to continue till 2021. However
, it is estimated
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisbursementoutlayfigureconsumptionpricerate
expenditure
 will dramatically
 decline to 4%by 2051. In the same way
, the spending on pension was a leveling off with 6% in the year from 2001 to 2021. Moreover
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisbursementoutlayfigureconsumptionpricerate
expenditure
 will rapidly
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esacalate
 with 18% in 2051. From the overall
 analysis, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
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speding
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decrease
 and in the upcoming days it will remain same, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisbursementoutlayfigureconsumptionpricerate
expenditure
 on medical care and pension will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 opposing trend in the future. 