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The given bar chart compares the percentage of profits made from the seven most beloved movie genres in US movie theaters in 1995, 2000, and 2005.

The given bar chart compares the percentage of profits made from the seven most beloved movie genres in US movie theaters in 1995, 2000, and 2005. j8dyd
The given bar chart compares the percentage of profits made from the seven most beloved movie genres in US movie theaters in 1995, 2000, and 2005. Overall, it is clear that although the profit proportion of movie genres went up and down several times from 1995 to 2005, adventure, comedy, action, and drama made the largest percentages in the percentage of profits compared to thriller, musicals, and animations. In addition, after a decade, an uptrend was seen in the proportion of profits made from adventure, comedy, and animation while the remaining ones showed a downtrend in the percentage of profits. In 1995, drama brought the most profit to US cinemas, when it contributed roundly 28% in the profit proportion. In contrast, animation made up the smallest proportion in the percentage of profits at 8%. However, in 2000, comedy rose to the top in the profit proportion at 25%, while animation still kept the smallest portion in the percentage of profits at 10%. In 2005, comedy remained the top position in the profit percentage at nearly 27%, whilst the smallest percentage in the profit proportion belonged to musicals at approximately 7%.
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made from the seven most beloved movie genres in US movie theaters in 1995, 2000, and 2005.

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of movie genres went up and down several times from 1995 to 2005, adventure,
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, action, and drama made the largest
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in the
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compared to thriller, musicals, and animations.
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made from adventure,
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, and animation while the remaining ones
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to US cinemas, when it contributed
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at 25%, while animation
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at 10%. In 2005,
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remained the top position in the
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belonged to musicals at approximately 7%.
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IELTS academic The given bar chart compares the percentage of profits made from the seven most beloved movie genres in US movie theaters in 1995, 2000, and 2005.

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