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The graph shows the private debt and credit in the UK since 1880.

The graph shows the private debt and credit in the UK since 1880. eoM7
The given line chart illustrate the secret debits and assests in the United Kingdom since 1880. GDP are measured in percentages. Overall, the British debits has the significant rose over the period whereas the credits has a minority percentage and remains fluctuates continously in the period given. In terms of debts, it started with exactly 60% in 1880 and remains at same proportion till 1910. Infact, loans marginally dropped by approximately 30% from 1910 to 1920 and then it significatly increased to 70% between 1930 and 1940. Here, again debts dramatically declined to 30% after 1940 which is the lowest percentage during overall time period. In 1980, figures maintained exactly same as first year which is refered as Thatcher and then significantly rose and reached to highest peak which is almost 190% in 2010 where great recession took placed and then it dropped to 160% in the final year. On the other hand, assests started with zero percentage in starting year and it remains stable till 1910. It reached its lowest point by decreasing by 10% from 1910 and then rose to 10% after 10 years. Likewise, after 1920 again it dropped to -10% and it slighlty maintained ups and downs until 1990 where it reached to it maximum proportion to 20%. Also, it again reached under 0% in 2010 and it increases by 10% in 2020.
The
given
line chart illustrate the secret debits and
assests
in the United Kingdom since 1880. GDP
are measured
in percentages.

Overall
, the British debits has the significant rose over the period whereas the credits has a minority percentage and remains fluctuates
continously
in the period
given
.

In terms of debts, it
started
with exactly 60% in 1880 and remains at same proportion till 1910.
Infact
, loans
marginally
dropped by approximately 30% from 1910 to 1920 and then it
significatly
increased to 70% between 1930 and 1940. Here, again debts
dramatically
declined to 30% after 1940 which is the lowest percentage during
overall
time period. In 1980, figures maintained exactly same as
first
year which is
refered
as Thatcher and then
significantly
rose and
reached
to
highest
peak which is almost 190% in 2010 where great recession took placed and then it dropped to 160% in the final year.

On the other hand
,
assests
started
with zero percentage in starting year and it remains stable till 1910. It
reached
its lowest point by decreasing by 10% from 1910 and then rose to 10% after 10 years.
Likewise
, after 1920 again it dropped to -10% and it
slighlty
maintained ups and downs until 1990 where it
reached
to it maximum proportion to 20%.
Also
, it again
reached
under 0% in 2010 and it increases by 10% in 2020.
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