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The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. jj0y

A glance at the graph provided reveals the number of males and females in an Asian country who had received their driver's licenses in the period from 1980 to 2010. Overall, it is evident from the bar chart that over the given period more women passed their driving test than men. In 1980, the percentage of female Asian inhabitants who passed the driving test was a mere under 50%, while the male was only about 30%. However, there was a significant rise in the number of men a year after, it accounted for almost 30%. Meanwhile, the number of women who received their driver's license slightly rose in 1990, prior to surging to almost 70% in the 2000th. However, after the dramatic increase, the female percentage slightly decreased in the next ten years. By contrast, it is interesting that in the period from 2000 to 2010 the number of males who passed the test remained constant at 50%.

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 a year after, it accounted for almost 30%. Meanwhile, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
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 of women You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
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By contrast, it is interesting that in the period from 2000 to 2010 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of males You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
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 remained constant at 50%. 