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The graph below illustrates the transformation of the village of Stokeford in the year 1930 and 2010.

The graph below illustrates the transformation of the village of Stokeford in the year 1930 and 2010. 0q3G

The graph below illustrates the transformation of the village of Stokeford in the year 1930 and 2010. Overall, there was a decrease in the amount of farmland while the number of buildings was on the rise. Some places including post office, bridge were kept while other places were then rebuilt or replaced with new contructions. In the year of 1930, shops and the post office were located along River Stoke and the primary school was built on the opposite side. However, in the next 80 years, only the post office remained while the shops were totally disappeared. Besides, primary school was then rebuilt and became bigger in size. Before, farmland accounted for a large proportion of Stokeford’s land but then was cut down in 2010 by the construction of new houses in the village. Garden sited near the primary school was converted into retirement home in 2010.

The graph below illustrates the transformation of the village of Possible spelling mistake found.Stoke ford
Stokeford
 in the year 1930 and 2010.

Overall
, there was a decrease in the amount of farmland while the number of buildings was on the rise. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 places including post office, bridge were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 while other places were then rebuilt or replaced with new Possible spelling mistake found.constructionscontractionscont ructions
contructions
.

In the year of 1930, shops and the post office were located
 along River Stoke and the primary school was built
 on the opposite side. However
, in the next
 80 years, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 the post office remained while the shops were totally
 disappeared. Besides
, primary school was then rebuilt and became A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.bigger
bigger in size
.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
, farmland accounted for a large proportion of Possible spelling mistake found.Stoke ford
Stokeford
’s land This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 then was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 down in 2010 by the construction of new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 in the village. Garden sited near the primary school was converted
 into retirement home in 2010. 