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The graph shows the percentage of international students enrolled in university in 5 countries in 2009 and 2013.

The graph shows the percentage of international students enrolled in university in 5 countries in 2009 and 2013. PWq0J
The bar graph compares the percentage of foreign students who admitted in higher education in five different countries in 2009 and 2013. Overall, it is notable that the number of admissions increased in the USA, UK and Spain, while, on the contrary, there has been a fall in the figures when it comes to Australia and Singapore. Although the USA and Spain were countries with comparatively very less enrollments in both the years, still they witnessed increments, along with the UK, having 3. 45% and 2. 69% admissions for USA and Spain in 2009 and 15. 29% for the UK, the values rose to 3. 9%, 2. 86% and 17. 46% respectively in 2013. Australia and Singapore faced slight decrement in the number of enrollees. Even after experiencing a declination from 21. 47% to 17. 97% for Australia, and from 20. 34% to 19. 17% for Singapore, they were the top two most preferred countries in both the years.
The bar graph compares the percentage of foreign students who admitted in higher education in five
different
countries in 2009 and 2013.

Overall
, it is notable that the number of admissions increased in the USA, UK and Spain, while,
on the contrary
, there has been a fall in the figures when it
comes
to Australia and Singapore.

Although the USA and Spain were countries with
comparatively
very
less
enrollments in both the years,
still
they witnessed increments, along with the UK, having 3. 45% and 2. 69% admissions
for USA
and Spain in 2009 and 15. 29% for the UK, the values rose to 3. 9%, 2. 86% and 17. 46%
respectively
in 2013.

Australia and Singapore faced slight decrement in the number of
enrollees
.
Even after
experiencing a declination from 21. 47% to 17. 97% for Australia, and from 20. 34% to 19. 17% for Singapore, they were the top two most preferred countries in both the years.

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