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represented differences that were observed in Portland coastal town

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The two maps represented differences that were observed in Portland coastal town between 1950 and 2007. Overall, there were more infrustructural development, nearly well planned at the end of the period compared to the beginning. In contrary, reduced environmental reservations as urbanization took place in the area. Firstly, the initial period was a more of rural with green plantations nearly occupying half of the place. less environmental hazardous emitting machines represented by smaller car park as compared to the 2007. Similarly major road remained all the time from 1950. On the other hand, more developed and advanced road network is clearly observable, with modern storey car park on the left side in contrast to 1950 old one that was in the right side of the map. North west part of the modern map is apark, more shops and a cinema towards south of the same side separeted by new road. South east is residential area with double access road than the directly opposite side, more shops and as you move towards northern side beach apartments with the sea has modern transport system. Lastly, the main road in between vastly remained the same size but with improvement to cover the beach area in the modern map.
The two
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represented differences that
were observed
in Portland coastal town between 1950 and 2007.

Overall
, there were more
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infrustructural
development,
nearly
well planned at the
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end
of the period compared to the beginning. In contrary,
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reduced
environmental reservations as urbanization took place in the area.

Firstly
, the initial period was a more of rural with green plantations
nearly
occupying half of the place.
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less
environmental hazardous emitting machines represented by smaller car park as compared to the 2007.
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Similarly
major
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road
remained all the time from 1950.

On the other hand
, more developed and advanced
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road
network is
clearly
observable, with
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modern
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storey
car park on the
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left
side
in contrast
to 1950
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old
one that was
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in the right side
of the
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map
.
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North west
part of the
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modern
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map
is
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apark
, more shops and a cinema towards south of the same side
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separeted
by new
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road
.
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South east
is residential area with double access
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road
than the
directly
opposite side, more shops and as you
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move
towards northern side beach apartments with the sea has
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modern
transport system.
Lastly
, the main
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road
in between
vastly
remained the same size
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but
with improvement to cover the beach area in the
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modern
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map
.
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IELTS academic represented differences that were observed in Portland coastal town

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