Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The table graph illustrates the opinion

The table graph illustrates the opinion 6QrK

The table graph illustrates the survey results which was conducted to find opinion of the club members of the city sports club about the club's activities, facilities and timings of opening hours. Overall, it is clear that whereas the female members were very much satisfied with the opening hours than other two categories, the number of males are were very satisfied with club facilities than the other two categories.

The table graph illustrates the survey results which was conducted
 to find opinion of the club members of the city sports club about the club's activities, facilities and timings of opening hours. Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that whereas the female members were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much satisfied with the opening hours than other two categories, the number of males are Consider using a past participle here: "been".been
were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 satisfied with club facilities than the other two categories. 

IELTS academic The table graph illustrates the opinion

Academic

American English

1 paragraphs

69 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
?
One main idea per paragraph
?
Include an introduction and conclusion
?
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
?
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
?
Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
?
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Labels Descriptions

?
Currently is not available
Meet the criteria
Doesn't meet the criteria