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The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts show illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university. Firstly, the number of journal articles read by all students for 1 to 5 is about 67%, which is even higher than PHD students at 5% and Junior lectures at 1%. However, the number of journal articles ready by junior lectures for 6 to 11 is about 75%, which is higher than all students at 21% and PHD students at 15%. Lastly, the number of journal articles read by PHD students for 12 is about 80%, which is higher than junior lecturers at 24%, and then all students at 12%. Overall, although the number of journal articles read by PHD students for 12 is the highest at 80%, for 6 to 11 they are the lowest at 15%. Furthermore, the number of journal articles read by all students for 1 to 5 is the highest at 67% and however, for 12 is the lowest at only 12%. At last, the number of journal articles read by junior lecturers for 6 to 11 is about 75% although for 1 to 5 is only 1%.
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