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The purchasing pattern of three different music albums based on their gender and age in Britain is illustrated in the given charts.

The purchasing pattern of three different music albums based on their gender and age in Britain is illustrated in the given charts. 2bMwb

The purchasing pattern of three different music albums based on their gender and age in Britain is illustrated in the given charts. It is evident from the charts that most purchasers for all three genres of albums are males. In case of rock music, the rate of male purchase is 28, which is 10 more than the female purchasers. The disparity is seen shrunken by 2% in the case of pop-music purchase. This difference becomes even shallower(2%) in the case of the least preferred music album(classical music). The younger age groups are seen buying more albums with an exception in the case of classical music. When 32% of the youth aged 25-34 buy rock music albums, the younger age group(16-24) who buys the same is 2% less. The pattern is very similar in case of pop music. Around 25% of 35-44 age group buys both pop and rock music, whereas it is far less for the 40+ group. In case of classical music, most customers are from the oldest age group(20%), which is almost 5% more than 25-34 age group. The least purchase is by the youngest age group. Overall, there are more male customers for all types of music and more customers are from second age group.

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