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the graph shows the comparison between the use of car, bus and train by people each day between 1970 and 2013 in United Kingdom

the graph shows the comparison between the use of car, bus and train by people each day between 1970 and 2013 in United Kingdom mbNQA
Given graph depicts the comparison between the use of car, bus and train by people each day between 1970 and 2013 in United Kingdom It is noticeable that a plethora of people in the UK travel by using their personal cars as compared to bus and train. 6 million people travelled in 1970. This amount of computers are considerable rose in 2000 while only 4 million people traveled by bus. On the Other hand, in 2020 about 8 million people travelled by car and it is double amount as compared to bus in same period of time. In 2011-2012 people are used bus and train for travelling are parallel to each other. In 1980 approximately 2 million people travelled by train and this could gradually rise as the years go up. while modestly decrease In amount of UK commuters which travelled by bus in the same period. By 2030 about 9 million computers are used their car are expected. However 5 million and 3 million commuters travel by train and bus respectively it is clear that buses are predicted to become less choice for travelling as compared to train and cars.
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each day between 1970 and 2013 in United Kingdom

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people
in the UK travel by using their personal
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cars
as compared to bus and
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train
. 6
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million
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people
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travelled
in 1970. This amount of computers are considerable rose in 2000 while
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million
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traveled by bus.

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, in 2020 about 8
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million
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people
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travelled
by
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and it is double amount as compared to bus in same period of time. In 2011-2012
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people
are
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bus and
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for travelling are parallel to each other.

In 1980 approximately 2
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million
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people
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travelled
by
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and this could
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rise as the years go up. while
modestly
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by bus in the same period.

By 2030 about 9
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computers are
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and 3
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commuters travel by
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train
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respectively
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IELTS academic the graph shows the comparison between the use of car, bus and train by people each day between 1970 and 2013 in United Kingdom

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191 words
6.0
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