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The Charts show data about growth in economy and types houshold expenditure over period of 15 years from 1995 to 2010

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The Charts show data about growth in economy and types houshold expenditure over period of 15 years from 1995 to 2010 It is clear from the line graph that, highest result of the economic was in 2005 while lowest was in before 2010. As can be seen from the pie charts, housing was first breakdowm of household expenditure over the given period except in 2000 which food was main expenditure At the start of period, the figure experienced a minimal growth. Then, it remained stable about 5years in the process of transition to the 21st century. The rate picked up its highest point, at 5 before falling dramaticaly by 10, to its bottom. Finaly, it has climbed by 5 in 2010. In 1995, the first household expenditure was housing and then stayed food anf other with the same amount while clothing, entertainment, travel had minimal quantity. After 5 years, the food percentage increased and exceeded food. At last, all categories of houshold expenditure formed apperance of own 2010
The Charts
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data about growth in economy and types
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houshold
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expenditure
over period of 15 years from 1995 to 2010

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clear
from the line graph that,
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highest
result of the economic was in 2005 while lowest was in
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2010. As can be
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from the pie charts, housing was
first
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breakdowm
of household
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expenditure
over the
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period except in 2000 which
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food
was main
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expenditure


At the
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start
of period, the figure experienced a minimal growth. Then, it remained stable about 5years in the process of transition to the 21st century. The rate picked up its highest point, at 5
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before
falling
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dramaticaly
by 10, to its bottom.
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Finaly
, it has climbed by 5 in 2010.

In 1995, the
first
household
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expenditure
was housing and then stayed
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food
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anf
other with the same amount while clothing, entertainment, travel had minimal quantity. After 5 years, the
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food
percentage increased and exceeded
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food
. At last, all categories of
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houshold
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expenditure
formed
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apperance
of
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own
2010
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IELTS academic The Charts show data about growth in economy and types houshold expenditure over period of 15 years from 1995 to 2010

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