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The graph shows the average temperatures and rainfall amounts for each month of the year in Kolkata.

The graph shows the average temperatures and rainfall amounts for each month of the year in Kolkata. RNNAG
The graph shows the average temperatures and rainfall amounts for each month of the year in Kolkata. In general, it can be seen that the temperature peaks in May and bottoms in January with relatively little variation. As for the precipitation, it varies greatly throughout the year, with July and December as the wettest and driest months respectively. The lowest monthly average temperature is 20 degrees Celcius in January, which gradually increases until it peaks in May with 31 degrees Celcius. The temperature starts to decline very slowly in June until October when it reaches 27 degrees Celcius, and continues to fall with a higher pace until January. As for the rainfall averages, it remains relatively low (100 milimeters or lower) from January to May and see a rapid increase until July, when it peaks at almost 350 milimeters. The rainfall amount stays quite high (250 milimeters or higher) until September, then quickly declines until December with around 10 milimeters. As for the correlation between temperature and rainfall, it looks like the coolest months of the year are also the driest (November to March). The temperature starts to cool down a bit in June, which seems to be influenced by the high amount of rainfall.
The graph
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the average
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temperatures
and
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rainfall
amounts for each month of the year in Kolkata.
In general
, it can be
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seen
that the
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temperature
peaks in May and bottoms in January with
relatively
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little
variation. As for the precipitation, it varies
greatly
throughout the year, with July and December as the wettest and driest months
respectively
.

The lowest monthly average
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temperature
is 20 degrees
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Celcius
in January, which
gradually
increases until it peaks in May with 31 degrees
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Celcius
. The
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temperature
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starts
to decline
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very
slowly
in June until October when it reaches 27 degrees
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Celcius
, and continues to fall with a higher pace until January. As for the
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rainfall
averages, it remains
relatively
low (100
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milimeters
or lower) from January to May and
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see
a rapid increase until July, when it peaks at almost 350
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milimeters
. The
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rainfall
amount stays quite high (250
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milimeters
or higher) until September, then
quickly
declines until December with around 10
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milimeters
.

As for the correlation between
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temperature
and
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rainfall
, it looks like the coolest months of the year are
also
the driest (November to March). The
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temperature
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starts
to cool down a bit in June, which seems to
be influenced
by the high amount of
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rainfall
.
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IELTS academic The graph shows the average temperatures and rainfall amounts for each month of the year in Kolkata.

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