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The graph shows sakes of five different types of jam from 2009 to 2014

The graph shows sakes of five different types of jam from 2009 to 2014 PkOMX

The rendered line graph reveals information about the marketing of five distinct types of jam over the period of 5 years. Overview, it is clear that strawberry was purchased by maximum number of people; however, minimum was accounted for plump in the last year. As can be seen from the graph, sales of both strawberry as well as cherry had shown inclining trend in over the period of time while for plum, it had followed declining pattern in the end year which was obtained negligible. Turning to the next Information, only a difference was obtained between the sales of raspberry and cherry in 2009. Moreover, there was a yawning gap between the sales of raspberry as well as cherry. The respective figures we're 3 millions and five millions. After that, marketing of both sales were remained approximately leveled off till 2014.

The rendered line graph reveals information about the marketing of five distinct types of jam over the period of 5 years.

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clear
 that strawberry was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 by maximum number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
; however
, minimum was accounted
 for plump in the last year.

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seen
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sales
 of both strawberry Probable usage error. Use "and" after 'both'.and
as well as
 cherry had shown inclining trend in over the period of time while for plum, it had followed declining pattern in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 year which was obtained
 negligible.

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 Information, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 a difference was obtained
 between the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
sales
 of raspberry and cherry in 2009. Moreover
, there was a yawning gap between the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
sales
 of raspberry as well
 as cherry. The respective figures we're 3 millions and five millions. After that, marketing of both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
sales
were remained
 approximately leveled off till 2014. 