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The diagram indicates the produce of the plastic bottles have been recycled

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The diagram indicates the produce of the plastic bottles have been recycled. Overall, this process includes 9 steps, beginning with collecting the bottles and ending with creating a finished goods. In the first step of process, the plastic bottles that people throw it will be collected and transported by a truck to recycling center. In recycling center, bottles are sorted to choose the right products. After that, the bottles are compressed into blocks then crushed by an equipment and washed the plastic that already crushed. The next step of this process, pieces of plastic will become a plastic pellects by a device. Following this, plastic pellects are heated to transform a low materials. The raw materials will be collected into one block and packed it into pallets. The final step, from raw materials are produced into end products and have two types of this: one for recycling a plastic products again or clothes, pencils and the reusable bags.
The diagram indicates the produce of the
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plastic
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bottles
have
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.
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, this process includes 9
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steps
, beginning with collecting the
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bottles
and ending with creating a finished
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goods
. In the
first
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step
of process, the
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plastic
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bottles
that
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people
throw it will
be collected
and transported by a truck to recycling center. In recycling center,
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bottles
are sorted
to choose the right products. After that, the
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bottles
are compressed
into blocks then crushed by an equipment and washed the
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plastic
that already crushed. The
next
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step
of this process, pieces of
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plastic
will become a
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plastic
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pellects
by a device. Following this,
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plastic
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pellects
are heated
to transform a low
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materials
. The raw materials will
be collected
into one block and packed it into pallets. The final
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step
, from raw materials
are produced
into
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end
products and have two types of this: one for recycling a
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plastic
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products
again or clothes, pencils and the reusable bags.
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IELTS academic The diagram indicates the produce of the plastic bottles have been recycled

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