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How a solar powered water pump works

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The diagram given above indicates the way solar-powered water pump function. Solar means sun. In this, renewable energy from the sun(solar energy) is utilized. We can depict how the water in the underground reaches a village and how the sun helps in this procedure. When we get into the process, we can see solar panels. These solar panels contain photovoltaic cells, which absorb heat and light energy from the sun and convert them into electrical energy. DC power from the panel is taken by the water pump, which is organized below ground level, in the underground bore/well when switched ON. This electric energy is, in turn, converted into mechanical energy. This bore pump takes the help of mechanical energy to push liquid up into the water tank steadily. Eventually, from the water tank, water is sent to a village. This way, solar-driven water power works with the help of renewable energy from the sun.
The diagram
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above indicates the way solar-powered
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water
pump function. Solar means
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sun
. In this, renewable
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energy
from the sun(solar
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energy)
is utilized
.

We can depict how the
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water
in the underground reaches a village and how the
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sun
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helps
in this procedure.

When we
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get
into the process, we can
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see
solar panels. These solar panels contain photovoltaic cells, which absorb heat and light
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energy
from the
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sun
and convert them into electrical
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energy
.
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DC power
from the panel
is taken
by the
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water
pump, which
is organized
below ground level, in the underground bore/well when switched ON. This electric
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energy
is, in turn, converted into mechanical energy.

This bore pump takes the
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help
of mechanical
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energy
to push liquid up into the
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water
tank
steadily
.
Eventually
, from the
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water
tank,
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water
is
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sent
to a village. This way, solar-driven
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water
power works with the
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help
of renewable
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energy
from the
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sun
.
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IELTS academic How a solar powered water pump works

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154 words
6.5
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