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The graph shows information about price of oil and food price index in the world from 2000 to 2011.

The graph shows information about price of oil and food price index in the world from 2000 to 2011. kb1Ln
The line graph compares the average price of oil per barrel with the food price index in the world from 2000 to 2011. Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that similar trends were witnessed in the food price index and the average price. In 2000, the food price index stood at about 90 points, and the average oil price was around $25 per barrel. Over the following 7 years, the food price index rose slightly to 135 points, while the average price of oil experienced a similar trend and stood at roughly $60 for each barrel in 2007. 2008 witnessed a rocket in the food price index and average oil price. The food price index hit a high level at 220 points, while the average oil price peaked at $135 per barrel. However, both figures fell rapidly in 2009, to 140 points for the food price index and $40 for each barrel for the oil price, before Rising significantly again. In the last year of the period given, the food price index reached a peak of 240 points, and the average oil price stood at $100 per barrel.
The line graph compares the
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in the world from 2000 to 2011.

Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that similar trends
were witnessed
in the
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price
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and the
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price.

In 2000, the
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stood at about 90
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, and the
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was around $25 per
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. Over the following 7 years, the
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rose
slightly
to 135
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, while the
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of
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experienced a similar trend and stood at roughly $60 for each
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in 2007.

2008 witnessed a rocket in the
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. The
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hit a high level at 220
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, while the
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peaked at $135 per
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and $40 for each
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reached a peak of 240
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, and the
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stood at $100 per
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IELTS academic The graph shows information about price of oil and food price index in the world from 2000 to 2011.

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