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The graph shows average carbon dioxide emission per person in UK, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007

The graph shows average carbon dioxide emission per person in UK, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 NDgy

The line graph represents the information about the quantity of Carbon dioxide produce by a person from 1967 to 2007 in four different countries i. e. UK, Sweden, Italy and Portugal. Overall, in countries like England and Sweden amount of CO2 exhaled reduce whereas in Italy and Portugal inclined Carbon dioxide emission and kept constant by the end of 2007. As shown in the figure, United Kingdom remained the biggest manufacturer for CO2. UK had the production of CO2 more than 10 metric tones in 1967 while Sweden followed up with more than 8 metric tones. In 1977 Swedish people inclined CO2 emission by nearly 2 metric tones where British slightly decreased exhale of Carbon dioxide. The amount of CO2 produce were almost equal to each other with more than 10 metric tones. UK gradually reduced breathing out carbon dioxide in following decades but Sweden declined CO2 manufacture tremendously in following decades. The quantity at the end of UK was well above 8 metrics tones but Sweden had less emission than UK by nearly 4 metric tones. Portugal was the lowest producer of CO2 in the beginning and even in the end. In 1967, Portugal produced less than 2 metric tones where Italy had twice more amount of CO2 realized than Portugal. Italy and Portugal raised CO2 emission through out the decades. By the end of 2007, the quantity of CO2 emitted by Portugal and Italy remained constant just below 6 metric tones and around 8 metrics tones respectively. In 2007, Sweden and Portugal were the lowest maker of CO2 in environment with less than 6 metric tones.

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