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The line graph shows three different crimes in England and Wales in 1970-2005.

The line graph shows three different crimes in England and Wales in 1970-2005. Yl7N

The line graph compares the number of three different of crimes in England and Wales from 1970 to 2005. Overall it is readily apparent that, the car theft and house burgling were the main crimes in England and Wales while the figures of street robbery was the lowest. To begin with, in 1970 the number of car theft was the highest 0. 4 million which was twice the million of house burgling. Then it showed an increase of 0. 2 million in the year 1980 and reached quickly to 1 million in 1990. After that, it reached a peak of 1. 6million in 1995 but declined dramatically by 0. 2 million in each final years 2000 and 2005. As to the number of house burgling, it started at 0. 2 million in the year 1970 and rose to 0. 6 million in the year 1980, thrice more than that 1st year. Additionally, it stabilized till 1985 at 0. 6million increasing slightly more than that till the next 10 years. However it fall slowly to 0. 5 million in the last year. When it comes to the number of robbery, it remained stable until 1990. Afterwards, there was a brief growth of 0. 2 million in the following years.

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