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changes in the mode of transport

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The table outlines the changes in the mode of transportation used by Britons between 1985 and 2000. As can be seen, cars were the most reliable mode of transportation among travelers, increasing from 3199 miles in 1985 to 4806 miles in 2000. On the other hand, taxi was the least preferred mode of traveling with an increase of almost three times more in 2000. In 1985, the second most common way of traveling was the local bus but its use declined over the time frame. In contrast, the long-distance bus became more popular over time. Similarly, the Britons traveled 255 miles on foot in 1985 but dropped to 237 miles in 2000. Moreover, commuters traveled 239 passenger miles in 1985 but increased significantly after 15 years. However, by 2000, bicycles became the least used mode of travel. All other transportations comprised about 450 miles which increased to 585 by 2000. Overall, the popularity of cars rose among the Britons over time whereas bicycle was the least used transport. Furthermore, the average miles traveled by Britons increased significantly over the years.
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IELTS academic changes in the mode of transport

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