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The line graph provides information about the fluctuation in the prices of three different food item groups from the year 1978 to 2009 and the overall trend in the consumer price index over these 30 years. Overall, it's clear that the price increased for the three food groups despite the fluctuations. Only the increase in the prices for fresh fruits and vegetables was significantly higher than the consumer index price. All the lines in the graph started from the same point in the year 1979. Over the period, the consumer price index rose steadily from 60 in 1979 to over 200 in 2009. Prices of sugar and sweets and carbonated drinks showed a similar trend. Although their prices were rose but consistently below the consumer price index average after 1987. After many minor fluctuations, the number of sugar and sweets was 200 on the graph in 2009 higher than the final figure for carbonated drinks at 150. The price was sharply rose for fruits and vegetables from 1989 to 2009 with more than 150 to roughly 330.

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started
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 minor fluctuations, the number of sugar and sweets was 200 on the graph in 2009 higher than the final figure for carbonated drinks at 150.

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 for fruits and vegetables from 1989 to 2009 with more than 150 to roughly 330. 