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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 90y3
This chart shows how many spent on six products in some European country. It is clear from the graph that the UK are always highest spent on goods. According to what is shown, we have the United Kingdom that spent 170 on Photographic Films and about the same for CDs and Toys by 165. And we have 155 on Tennis Racquets and Personal stereos. And last by 160 on Perfumes. Therefore we have France spent 165 on Photographic Films and nearly equal spending for Tennis Racquets, Personal stereos and Perfumes. And Toys and CDs are the same, approxamtely, by 158. Then you have Germany by 150 for Photographic Films, Tennis Racquets and Perfumes. And about 145 for Toys, CDs and Personal Storeos. Then, Italy by 150 for CDs and Personal Stereos. Therefore about 155 for Photographic Films, Toys and Perfumes. To sum up, we could say that the Britain are always the best then France, Italy and lastly Germany.
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spent
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European country. It is
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from the graph that the UK are always highest
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According to what
is shown
, we have the United Kingdom that
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spent
170 on
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Photographic
Films and about the same for
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CDs
and
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Toys
by 165. And we have 155 on Tennis Racquets and
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Personal
stereos. And last by 160 on Perfumes.
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Therefore
we have France
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spent
165 on
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Photographic
Films and
nearly
equal spending for Tennis Racquets,
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Personal
stereos and Perfumes. And
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Toys
and
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CDs
are the same,
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approxamtely
, by 158. Then you have Germany by 150 for
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Photographic
Films, Tennis Racquets and Perfumes. And about 145 for
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Toys
,
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CDs
and
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Personal
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Storeos
.

Then, Italy by 150 for
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CDs
and
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Stereos.
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Therefore
about 155 for
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Photographic
Films,
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Toys
and Perfumes.

To sum up, we could say that the Britain are always the best then France, Italy and
lastly
Germany.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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159 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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