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The following diagram illustrates about how ethanol fuel is made from the corn.

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The following diagram illustrates about how ethanol fuel is made from the corn. Overall, at least eight steps are involved in the production of ethanol fuel. First of all, the corn is stored for milling. Next the water is added to undergo the cooking process which takes for 4 hours. Subsequently, it needs to be fermented for 48 hours and then separates into liquid and solid parts. The liquid part of separation goes through the step called purifying ethanol that needs about 5 hours. The purified ethanol is kept and finally they are transported to the certain destination. To conclude, it is clear that the manufacturing of ethanol fuel is not strenuous as it seems.
The following diagram illustrates about how
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fuel
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from the corn.
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, at least eight steps
are involved
in the production of
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ethanol
fuel.

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First of all
, the corn
is stored
for milling.
Next
the water is
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added
to undergo the cooking process which takes for 4 hours.
Subsequently
, it needs to
be fermented
for 48 hours and then separates into liquid and solid parts. The liquid part of separation goes through the step called purifying
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ethanol
that needs about 5 hours. The purified
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ethanol
is
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kept
and
finally
they
are transported
to the certain destination.
To conclude
, it is
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clear
that the manufacturing of
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ethanol
fuel is not strenuous as it seems.

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