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The given table chart depicts the total population of top ten countries in 2019 and how it expected to be in next century.

The given table chart depicts the total population of top ten countries in 2019 and how it expected to be in next century. ox9Mb
The given table chart depicts the total population of top ten countries in 2019 and how it expected to be in next century. In conclusion, china had the highest people but India will take that position in the future. In 2019, china stood in first position with the largest individuals of 1439 millions and India was on second place with 1380 millions while, that population projected to be changed in 2100 as India will have the maximum population. However, US had the third major country in population and it followed by Indonesia and Pakistan. More interestingly, tiny country of Nigeria will be going to extend his residents from 206 millions to 730 millions. Subsequently, three nations Bangladesh, Russia, and Mexico had the lowest population of 165, 146 and 129 millions respectively, however these countries will remove and other nations take its positions. A huge difference of 40 millions can be noticed in the Brazil residents growth and it expected to be in last after eight decades.
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of top ten
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in 2019 and how it
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, china had the highest
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people
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India will take that position in the future.

In 2019, china stood in
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position with the largest individuals of 1439
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millions
and India was on second place with 1380
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millions
while, that
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population
projected to be
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changed
in 2100 as India will have the maximum
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population
.
However
, US had the third major
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country
in
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population
and it followed by Indonesia and Pakistan.

More
interestingly
, tiny
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country
of Nigeria will be going to extend his residents from 206
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millions
to 730
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millions
.
Subsequently
, three nations Bangladesh, Russia, and Mexico had the lowest
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population
of 165, 146 and 129
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millions
respectively
,
however
these
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countries
will remove and other nations take its positions. A huge difference of 40
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millions
can
be noticed
in the Brazil residents growth and it
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expected
to be in last after eight decades.
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IELTS academic The given table chart depicts the total population of top ten countries in 2019 and how it expected to be in next century.

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