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The graph is about the funds given in charity by the citizens of British having different age boundaries for year 1990 and 2010.

The graph is about the funds given in charity by the citizens of British having different age boundaries for year 1990 and 2010. m2391
The graph is about the funds given in charity by the citizens of British having different age boundaries for year 1990 and 2010. On x- axis, age range is given in years and on y- axis, percentage of charity is shown. The contribution in charity is minimum at the age varying from 18 to 25 in both the years. In 1990 highest funds are given by the people who are 36 to 50 years old which is approximately 42 percent and in year 2020 maximum donation of little less than 40 percent is provided by senior people ranging from 51 to 65 years. People having less age than 50 contributed more in 1990. Whereas, people with greater age than 50 or senior citizens provided more money in charity in 2010 The pattern of charity is almost similar in both the years. Percentage of charity is increasing with increase in the age of the people, then it is decreasing after reaching a particular limit of age.
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1990 and 2010. On x- axis,
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range is
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in years and on y- axis, percentage of
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is minimum at the
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varying from 18 to 25 in both the years. In 1990 highest funds are
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who are 36 to 50 years
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which is approximately 42 percent and in
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2020 maximum donation of
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less than 40 percent
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ranging from 51 to 65 years.
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People
having less
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than 50 contributed more in 1990. Whereas,
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with greater
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than 50 or senior citizens provided more money in
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in 2010 The pattern of
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charity
is almost similar in both the years. Percentage of
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is increasing with increase in the
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of the
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, then it is decreasing after reaching a particular limit of
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