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The chart gives information about the unemployment situation in Australia in one year in 2012.

The chart gives information about the unemployment situation in Australia in one year in 2012. OgRAd
The chart gives information about the unemployment situation in Australia in one year in 2012. The numbers are estimated in percentages. Overall, the unemployment rate in Australia is divided into two groups rural areas and urban areas. Four quarters of the year describe the differences between these two areas. To begin, in the first quarter urban areas were 4% below than rural areas, which were 6. 50%, having the biggest peak of that two areas. To compare with the fourth quarter of the year, where urban areas increased a peak of an unemployment rate of nearly 5 percentage in 2012, but on the same time frame rural areas steady decline (5%), yet remained higher than urban areas. In the second quarter, they showed similar patterns both areas went down, but in the third quarter was a big difference because urban areas significantly drop to 2 percent, but rural areas significantly went up to over 5 percent.
The chart gives information about the unemployment situation in Australia in one year in 2012. The numbers
are estimated
in percentages.

Overall
, the unemployment rate in Australia
is divided
into two groups
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rural
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areas
and
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urban
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areas
. Four
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quarters
of the year
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describe
the differences between these two areas.

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begin
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first
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quarter
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urban
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areas
were 4%
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than
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rural
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areas
, which were 6. 50%, having the biggest peak of that two
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. To compare with the fourth
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quarter
of the year, where
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urban
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areas
increased a peak of an unemployment rate of
nearly
5 percentage in 2012,
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but
on the same time frame
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rural
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areas
steady decline (5%),
yet
remained higher than
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urban
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areas
. In the second
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quarter
, they
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showed
similar patterns both
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went down,
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but
in the third
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quarter
was a
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big
difference
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significantly
drop to 2 percent,
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significantly
went up to over 5 percent.
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IELTS academic The chart gives information about the unemployment situation in Australia in one year in 2012.

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