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The graph indicates the difference between the site of an airport now at the look of it next year.

The graph indicates the difference between the site of an airport now at the look of it next year. NMKE2
The graph indicates the difference between the site of an airport now at the look of it next year. The facilities of the airport now are less than it after development. For example, the ATM, the sky train, the car hire and the bag drop are all new facilities, that didn't exist before. Due to the airport adding these new equiments, the space of the airport is also be widened. The sky train has replaced the walkway, and the road has been seperated into two direation. Furthermore, the shops is nearby the sky train, next to the security passport control. In addition to that, the check-in site has moved, and the origional location of it has become the bag drop site. Moreover, the caf'e is just by the departures entrance. On the other hand, the another caf'e is at the coner of the arrivals centre, situate by the ATM. The last but not least, car hire is locate at a expend area, where close to the arrival entrance.
The graph indicates the difference between the site of an
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at the look of it
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year.

The facilities of the
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airport
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now
are less than it after development.
For example
, the ATM, the sky train, the car hire and the bag drop are all new facilities, that didn't exist
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before
.

Due to the
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airport
adding these new
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equiments
, the space of the
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airport
is
also
be widened
. The sky train has replaced the walkway, and the road has been
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seperated
into two
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direation
.
Furthermore
, the shops is nearby the sky train,
next
to the security passport control.
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to that, the
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check
-in site has
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moved
, and the
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origional
location of it has become the bag drop site.
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, the
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caf
'e is
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by the departures entrance.

On the other hand
, the another
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caf
'e is at the
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coner
of the arrivals
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centre
, situate by the ATM. The last
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not least, car hire is
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at
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expend area, where close to the arrival entrance.

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