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The graph illustrates the number of journeyers having a vacation in Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph illustrates the number of journeyers having a vacation in Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Qwexb

The line grap illustrates the number of visitors who travelled to a particular Caribbean island over a period of seven years, starting from 2010. It can be clearly seen that the total number of tourists experienced an sharp increase. An other striking feature is that tourists preferred staying on cruise ship rather than staying on island. In 2010, the number of visitors choosing for staying in island was thrice as much as the figure for staying on cruise ships. After 3 years, a considerable increase was recorded in the number of people opting for staying on island, at 1. 5 millions. By contrast, the figure for staying on the ships fluctuated and located at 0. 5 millions in 2013. A opposite changes were recorded from 2013 to 2017. A sharp increase was recorded in the figure for staying on cruise ship, reaching a peak of 2 millions. However, the number of people staying on island remained stable until 2015 and was dropped slightly in 2016. At the end of the period, 1. 5 millions of tourists who stayed on island was registered. In addition, the total number for both two types of visitors peaked at 3. 5 million 2017.

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