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The graph illustrates the average output of carbon dioxide in metric tonnes for each individual in four European countries over a forty-year period.

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The graph illustrates the average output of carbon dioxide in metric tonnes for each individual in four European countries over a forty-year period. Overall, C02 output per individual in the UK and Sweden began the highest but witnessed a decline toward the end of the period. Conversely, Italy and Portugal started with relatively low emissions but saw considerable increases by the end of the timeframe. In 1967 the UK had the highest proportion of carbon emissions at around 11 metric tonnes per person, however, throughout the whole period there was a steady decline in C02 output ending at around 9 metric tonnes for each individual. Swedens output started at approximately 9 metric tonnes, it rose to a peak of around 11 tonnes in 1977 and then saw a sharp decline to approximately half of that by 2007. In contrast, Portugal in 1967 had the lowest output at just over 1 tonne per person. Over the next 40 years, this increased gradually ending at over 5 metric tonnes. Italy demonstrated a similar pattern, beginning at 4 metric tonnes and ending at nearly 8 tonnes of CO2 by 2007.
The graph illustrates the average
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of carbon dioxide in metric tonnes for each individual in four European countries
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a forty-year period.

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, C02
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per individual in the UK and Sweden began the highest
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witnessed a decline toward the
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of the timeframe.

In 1967 the UK had the highest proportion of carbon emissions at around 11 metric tonnes per person,
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ending at around 9 metric tonnes for each individual.
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at approximately 9 metric tonnes, it rose to a peak of around 11 tonnes in 1977 and then
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a sharp decline to approximately half of that by 2007.

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1 tonne per person.
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5 metric tonnes. Italy demonstrated a similar pattern, beginning at 4 metric tonnes and ending at
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8 tonnes of CO2 by 2007.
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IELTS academic The graph illustrates the average output of carbon dioxide in metric tonnes for each individual in four European countries over a forty-year period.

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